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Grievous..
17-04-2006, 18:56
Hey Guys Im only after logging onto your site now and played MbII exactly one week now and I think its great!, I just filmed an 3 minute long movie of battle of genosis which took 4 hours to put together and add sounds to , Please give me some advice and stuff after you watched it and enjoy! Inspiration: MbII team, Zappa and Yoshi.

http://download.yousendit.com/A513626250CD2940

master yoda
17-04-2006, 19:12
Welcome to MB btw ;

Some advice, please change your sentences color, you made my eyes bleed while reading that.

Some advice about the sound, in the begin your hear a saber fight but you dont see anything :confused: and also the clone in the beginning, If you only hear the sounds its like hes shooting in burst mode or someting, but hes clearly shooting automaticly.

Buts for the rest it was pretty good .

MarcusMaximus
17-04-2006, 19:15
Try not to move your camera so much or move in 1 direction.
And the sound effects where to loud compared with the rest.
Further nice first try.




p.s. Don't use red on the forums it hurts the eyes. (same as 'master yoda')

Cephas
17-04-2006, 19:34
I see you took some creative lisence with the battle of Geonosis :P

I recommend not using Saberthrow so much in movies. You want something aesthetically pleasing and Saberthrow is the ugliest thing in the game.


Not bad for a first try, yup yup.

Striker
17-04-2006, 19:40
I liked the part where Obi-Wans head falls down. I also didn't like the ending. Make it a bit more. 'Ending' instead of just seeing obi-wan. Say some credits or something.

The sound effects could be a little touched up on. But I never done this. Good job.

Jasper_Kazai
17-04-2006, 20:28
Re-submit it please, the download reached its limit.

Yzmo
17-04-2006, 20:58
Try to upload it to JK3 files

Grievous..
17-04-2006, 21:10
:) thnx for the advice guys! and sry bout the letter colouring , will rapidshare do ok ?

yosh
17-04-2006, 22:43
This is a good movie, love the part where the gunships come down :)

AlphaFA
18-04-2006, 00:13
Put it on filefront please, it has an unlimited download limit.

PloZZt Kh'aar
18-04-2006, 07:32
The link you have clicked is not available.

O_o try on filefront.